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January 9, 2013
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Canon
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Canon EOS 60D
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1/500 second
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F/4.0
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68 mm
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Jan 9, 2013, 4:15:18 PM
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Model : Karoline Kate
St. Augustine, Florida
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Robomarkov Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Beautiful model. Nice setting.

..and then there is the "but"... it seems most things have a "but".

Have you ever had a mood where you can find the tarnish on the silver lining? That would be me, right now. I find the mesh between the velveteen blouse and the shorts (jean skirt?) to be a somewhat distracting element. The colorful shorts also are a distraction to my eye. The focus seems to be on her face, as her hair frames it so nicely and draws attention to it, but then my eye is drawn downward to the mesh and shorts.

I used another window to "crop" her at the mesh of the blouse and it seemed to help me.

There is my unsolicited critique and advice from "Joe Bob the utter novice". Take it as you will. I am going crawl back to the peanut gallery, now.
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DGPhotographyjax Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Professional Photographer
I really didn't tell you.....it's a one piece deal.....I thought the mesh would help with the fact of not having a belt....but I can see your point.
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DGPhotographyjax Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Professional Photographer
Thank you for the comment and critique :)
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M4XW3LL Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
nice!
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DGPhotographyjax Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Photographer
Thanks
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